Construction feedback

I was given construction feedback based on my magazine involving these creative uses of skills:

• Using IT appropriatley
• Understanding of conventions of layout/ page design
• Awareness of need for varirty in fonts and text size
• Accurate use language/ register
• Appropriate intergration illustration/ text
• Framing shots
• Variety of shots distances as appropriate
• Shooting appropriate material
• Selecting mise-en-scene (including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting)
• Manipulating photographs (including within text, within IT programmes, cropping, resizing)

From my feedback, the magazine seems to succeed in all areas giving it a level 4.

The best aspects of my work:

• The colours from her clothing you incorporated it with the font colours.
• The article seens as if it was produced by someone else as it sounds exactly like a writer and because of the use of your language.

Need to improve on:

• Add a little more text into the contents page so that it looks fuller.

In respronce I will add more text into the contents page to improve it's appearence.