Double page inprovements

After proof reading the article, I added corrections such as punctuation, spelling mistakes, removing and adding sentences.

Contents page improvements

As improvements I added more text to the contents to appear more full as well as updating the page numbers. I also enlarged the social site icons since they did not stand out to well before.

Construction feedback

I was given construction feedback based on my magazine involving these creative uses of skills:

• Using IT appropriatley
• Understanding of conventions of layout/ page design
• Awareness of need for varirty in fonts and text size
• Accurate use language/ register
• Appropriate intergration illustration/ text
• Framing shots
• Variety of shots distances as appropriate
• Shooting appropriate material
• Selecting mise-en-scene (including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting)
• Manipulating photographs (including within text, within IT programmes, cropping, resizing)

From my feedback, the magazine seems to succeed in all areas giving it a level 4.

The best aspects of my work:

• The colours from her clothing you incorporated it with the font colours.
• The article seens as if it was produced by someone else as it sounds exactly like a writer and because of the use of your language.

Need to improve on:

• Add a little more text into the contents page so that it looks fuller.

In respronce I will add more text into the contents page to improve it's appearence.

First Proof

This is my complete first proof of my front cover containing the house colours red, black and white with an addtional colour of blue which links well with the cover star. The masthead stands out with the shadow and outline effects, also the web address becomes a part of the masthead too. The cover star uses direct adress therefore links her to the target audience. The main cover line is enhanced with a black background which helps it to be recognised.

This is my complete first proof of my contents page with a variety of images and themed contents.

The complete first proof double page which includes a full article and a quote from the article as a taster for the reader. 

Double page first proof improvement

This I produced on 2 separate pages and with the addition with a completed article.