G321 Magazine draft feed back

The types of feed back I've been given includes the strengths and weaknesses of my draft cover, contents and double page.

The strengths:

• Appearence is contingent use of colours, looks realistic and target market is clear to make out.
• House colours are used through out the work, variety of photography used (facial expressions and positions), shows personality.
• This idea of the 'Loath' is good.
• The colours are not over powering.
• The layout of the article is good.
• The front cover has alot of detail without being to heavy.
• Double page links to the genre (rock/pop)
• The website being layed out across the masthead is effective.
• Genre is displayed through the flowers and the writing.

The development:

• Make the masthead stand out a bit more, cover maybe a bit full.
• Use 4 images, not just 3, first glimps does not express music.
• Display double page on 2 pages.
• Edit images to make them of a better quality.

I will improve upon the comments given and finish the article therefore it may seem more complete.